First time takeing cover photos for my magazine

Here are my photos from my first ever photoshot for my music magazine. As you may find when looking through these images that most of them are blured or out of foucus. This means that i may have to re-shoot. I choose to take the pictures from my college as it was easy for everyone to accsess and get to; the place also supples all the lighting and camera equiment. The person I have choosen for the frount cover is the girl (Charlotte) with the girl she was really photoagentic just the clothes didn't give the impression that she was a pop star and some people said she looked like a new reporter. Were the boy (James) could be used in the contence page was also photoagenic but same again didn't really ware the right type of clothes. So if i did this again I would make sure that the people wore pop relate clothes and instead of the guitar i would have a micphone.