Front cover design progress 2

Here is another verion of my draft music magazine were i have used the founts orange jucie with a pink on black tint to it as the blue i had used before didn't stand out as well when you looked at it from a distance.

Here is what the magazine looked before, and you can see that i have moved the masthead from being tilted to going across the top so it stands out more and is more easy to read. i also had to make all the sell lines bigger so make them more clearer to read.

for any idea that i could do to improve my magazine, i would love to hear feedback.