First drafts of my regional magazine radio adds

• Duration: 10- (a bit to short for a radio add as the convention for a normal add is around 40-60 seconds.)

Now with this add its straight to the point and doesn’t really engage with the audience that well but as a good point it dose tell the listener the important information. 

As the guy I got to read the script read the scrip way to fast so that its a bit hard to understand. 

• Duration: 19 sec

This is like the first add I did however the guy reading the scrip read the scrip a bit slower which did make the duration time slightly longer. 

• Duration: 31 secs 

 Out of the ones I've done personally I think that this is the script which works best out of the three I've done. 

 With this add it has a nice balance between engaging the audience to telling them all the relevant information. 

The guy also in this one that I liked was that with the script he put some emphasis to some of the words so that it sounded more like someone selling something to someone who just reading something. 

The only problem is that the person that I got to read out the scrip read the script really fast so when I get the final version I will find someone who reads the scripts slower.  

For my final radio add I’m going to have a female read the script out as this will help with the idea that the magazine is aimed at a female audience. I'm also going to have the actor act enthusiastic when she reads out the scrip to really sell the magazine. I’m also going to edit the voice file and put some background music which fits in with the add and is recognized for the Durham area.